I wrote this as an exercise in creating a specific atmosphere, focusing on sentence length and structure. I found this interesting excerpt discussing "writing music" from Gary Provost, and thought I'd give it a try.
What sort of atmosphere/vibe do you get from this story? Let me know to help me improve my writing! All feedback is appreciated.
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qyron@sopuli.xyz · 2 pts · 1y
Confinement, isolation and insanity, being held at bay by an animalistic survival instinct.
What were you looking for specifically?