In my opinion, you could clean up the design, make it a bit less like a human sketched it. I think the rays of the sun would look better with a white outline as well. These are just stylistic choices that I would make and you're free to ignore.
What I would definitely like to ask you to reconsider is the name of this fictional place. "Oriental" has picked up a few negative connotations in English, crossing into racist abuse on occasion. I'm sure you don't want that attached to your nice design.
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FriendOfDeSoto@startrek.website · 4 pts · 1y
In my opinion, you could clean up the design, make it a bit less like a human sketched it. I think the rays of the sun would look better with a white outline as well. These are just stylistic choices that I would make and you're free to ignore.
What I would definitely like to ask you to reconsider is the name of this fictional place. "Oriental" has picked up a few negative connotations in English, crossing into racist abuse on occasion. I'm sure you don't want that attached to your nice design.
jaiden@thelemmy.club · 2 pts · 1y
oh my god, I didn’t know! thanks. It will now be called Terra del Sol
gravitas_deficiency@sh.itjust.works · 2 pts · 1y
That’s not the proper nomenclature, dude
jaiden@thelemmy.club · 2 pts · 1y
Oh no! Now it’s called terra del sol 😓