Yeah, when I was drafting the template for this I envisioned reading it as more of a slideshow. I don't know why I did that, and so it does end up pretty compressed.
I might release a revised version of this in a few days--add one more girl, in facial and stomach, to balance things out; move the cumshot descriptions to be sort of a "first tile" in a row, rather than being a top bar; and rearrange some of the girls so there's less clumping (e.g., I didn't mean to give 6-7 lili and madelaine twice, that feels excessive).
It's constructive criticism, I'm not trashing the guy. pretty sure he'd want someone to tell him if it was hard to read. what I said is nothing compared to the constant whining and other crap I have to deal with on the main sub
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simp_of_Taylor@lemmynsfw.com · 4 pts · 1y
Going for creampie with Sydney.
CJC@lemmynsfw.com · 3 pts · 1y
Lucky. Would’ve chosen her if I was tall enough lol
simp_of_Taylor@lemmynsfw.com · 1 pts · 1y
Ahh, man. I get you.
CJC@lemmynsfw.com · 3 pts · 1y
Anal with Rachel
Btw the pics are really tiny and the text is hard to read on mobile. You have a lot of negative space you can fill with bigger text/pics
falada95@lemmynsfw.com · 3 pts · 1y
Also, gotta say, fantastic choice. She's so tight.
falada95@lemmynsfw.com · 2 pts · 1y
Yeah, when I was drafting the template for this I envisioned reading it as more of a slideshow. I don't know why I did that, and so it does end up pretty compressed.
I might release a revised version of this in a few days--add one more girl, in facial and stomach, to balance things out; move the cumshot descriptions to be sort of a "first tile" in a row, rather than being a top bar; and rearrange some of the girls so there's less clumping (e.g., I didn't mean to give 6-7 lili and madelaine twice, that feels excessive).
simp_of_Taylor@lemmynsfw.com · 1 pts · 1y
He’s been using MS Paint for all that, dude. Give some shoutout for whatever we’re getting
CJC@lemmynsfw.com · 1 pts · 1y
It's constructive criticism, I'm not trashing the guy. pretty sure he'd want someone to tell him if it was hard to read. what I said is nothing compared to the constant whining and other crap I have to deal with on the main sub
simp_of_Taylor@lemmynsfw.com · 2 pts · 1y
Ok, got it.
LegateDraconis@lemmynsfw.com · 2 pts · 317d
Anal with Rachel
pflanze@lemmynsfw.com · 1 pts · 1y