@originalpoetry Finally Done
My journey has been long.
My fever dream is finally over.
Done, is the pain and suffering.
Yet still I feel stuck in this dream.
My feet are still wet with the mud of the path.
Is this journey really over; finally over and done?
Stuck in the perpetual nightmare.
Long is the journey of pain and suffering.
Have I made this journey or is this yet a delusion?
Nay, my journey is done and gone.
Time to shake off the mud from my boots.
Leave behind the pain of the past—I’m finally done.
2 Comments
Lacanoodle@literature.cafe · 1 pts · 319d
Very nice.
My feet are still wet with the mud of the path is brilliant. Very tactile and love the flow of the sentence
TheparishofChigwell@sh.itjust.works · 1 pts · 96d
Nicely written and uplifting
Perhaps a conscious decision to be is all that we need for change