I think this is a good place to end it, but it was a little underwhelming to be honest. They met up like nothing happened, which was nice in its own way, but idk, I expected a little more drama or time together I guess. Maybe just 1 more chapter of them being back together to let their reunion simmer a little bit.
The part between him sitting on a train
and going to school, in place of speed-up through daze
could have easily be a single chapter of flash moments. From their meet-up, to them moving on/evolving.
And finally their return to school (like visiting for school festival) to just be separated and find/meet in art classroom.
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ReluctantZen@feddit.nl · 3 pts · 256d
I think this is a good place to end it, but it was a little underwhelming to be honest. They met up like nothing happened, which was nice in its own way, but idk, I expected a little more drama or time together I guess. Maybe just 1 more chapter of them being back together to let their reunion simmer a little bit.
DampCanary@lemmy.world · 2 pts · 256d
On one hand, them back in art classroom was nice end setup,
but I agree that a "clean-up" chapter would be appreciated
ReluctantZen@feddit.nl · 2 pts · 256d
I totally agree! I think that was perfect, it's just that something was lacking in the lead up to it.
DampCanary@lemmy.world · 2 pts · 256d
The part between him sitting on a train
and going to school, in place of speed-up through daze could have easily be a single chapter of flash moments. From their meet-up, to them moving on/evolving.
And finally their return to school (like visiting for school festival) to just be separated and find/meet in art classroom.