Titanium, Ruin and Strife (author: me)

https://www.ferenbrooke.com/short-stories/titanium-ruin-strife.html

Horror/sort of a character study perhaps, ~2k words.

Writing this was cathartic. I got messed up in a hit and run a few years ago, this story draws on that experience.

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4 Comments

SnokenKeekaGuard@lemmy.dbzer0.com · 2 pts · 228d (1 reply)

Great job with that and thanks for posting!

afb@lemmy.world · 2 pts · 228d

Thank you!

NannerBanner@literature.cafe · 2 pts · 235d (1 reply)

Read it. Enjoyed it. I felt the ending needed something more to flesh it out or be connected to something earlier.

afb@lemmy.world · 2 pts · 234d

Thanks! I'll keep that in mind for the next one.