c/poetry · by CheriNuka@lemmy.ca · 115d[OC] Smokes from stranger folk Excuse my abysmal penmanship 26 points · 4 comments · view on lemmy.world
4 Comments
CombatWombat@feddit.online · 7 pts · 115d
The abysmal penmanship brings a certain je ne sais quoi to the poem that really makes it a lot more fun.
CheriNuka@lemmy.ca · 3 pts · 115d
I like the parts where I change my mind on how I'm going to write it and you can see the start of a letter I was beginning to write before changing to another word :\
queerlilhayseed@piefed.blahaj.zone · 3 pts · 115d
I like visible toolmarks on art. It's like being able to see a little bit into the wings at a theatre.
CheriNuka@lemmy.ca · 3 pts · 115d
I'm trying to remember what word I was going to use instead of Toke, must have started with F, and it would have made the whole thing different
I bought a Frog from a hog in a bog on my way back from a jog with my dog :\