The TARDIS Tells a Joke: Update to an original story

https://speechify.app.link/UpvoHBcVr4b

This is an update to Chapter 1 of short-ish original Doctor Who story I'm writing. Or trying to, at least. I'd love some opinions on whether or not I'm capturing the energy of the show in a kind of novel-form.

I have it up as a Speechify above which will narrate it, or a PDF: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1DO6ZoDWImaaAiaj8P1TUeukzXm6GbP5-/view?usp=drive_link

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RampantParanoia2365@lemmy.world · 1 pts · 58d

Fair warning: There are liberties taken. I'm not intentionally breaking any canon, or making big changes, but I'm adding and expanding on a few details. Adding a bit of Spock, you might say.