c/poetry · by BonesOfTheMoon@lemmy.world · 1y

Steven Willis, "Temperature Check".

58 points · 8 comments · view on lemmy.world

8 Comments

HypnoticSheep@lemm.ee · 6 pts · 1y (1 reply)

This is so good, I've always been a big fan of poetry that uses line breaks with intention. The structure of a poem can be just as impactful as word choice, sometimes moreso. Great find :)

BonesOfTheMoon@lemmy.world · 3 pts · 1y

Me too!

wizzor@sopuli.xyz · 4 pts · 1y

Made me smile

TonyTonyChopper@mander.xyz · 3 pts · 1y (1 reply)

c slash lemmy be holesome

BonesOfTheMoon@lemmy.world · 1 pts · 1y

Ooh good idea.

OpenStars@discuss.online · 3 pts · 1y

The truth behind the lies, good one!:-)

clay_pidgin@sh.itjust.works · 2 pts · 1y (1 reply)

That's really good. I miss my grandmothers. :-/

BonesOfTheMoon@lemmy.world · 2 pts · 1y

As someone who didn't have grandmotherly grandmothers, I wish I had one like this.