First Self Portrait, critique welcome.

Nikon d3200 iso 100 1/100 f 3.5

47 points · 14 comments · view on lemmy.world

14 Comments

harsh3466@lemmy.world · 7 pts · 3y (2 replies)

Great job!

I love the mood you’ve created with the lighting, and the vulnerability. With the way your light is aimed, your shoulder/arm is picking up most of the light, and as the brightest spot in the photo it ends up drawing attention away from your face and expression.

Adjusting the light a bit to lessen the light on your shoulder and/or increase the light on your face would alleviate that.

Rebels_Droppin@lemmy.world · 3 pts · 3y (1 reply)

Thank you, as I mentioned in another reply, I am not entirely comfortable with my face so hearing you want more of it in the frame is nice to hear. Glad you liked the photo.

harsh3466@lemmy.world · 4 pts · 3y

I understand how you feel. A decade or so ago I did a daily self portrait project to both learn lighting and build my own self confidence/self acceptance. It’s a hard thing to do. I applaud you for putting yourself out there

ArcticAmphibian@lemmus.org · 4 pts · 3y (2 replies)

There's as much shoulder as head. Higher stand with a slight angle down, or just move the stand up.

Rebels_Droppin@lemmy.world · 2 pts · 3y (1 reply)

Fair, would have liked more headroom as well. I am a bit tall and the stand I have does not go that high. If i ever attempt again will keep the framing in mind a bit more. Thank you

ArcticAmphibian@lemmus.org · 2 pts · 3y

Happy to help. To help.with the issue you mention, you could set the stand on a box or sit down on a stool.

OneStopShop@lemmy.world · 3 pts · 3y (1 reply)

It looks great! Something about it gives off an aura of vulnerability! Really impactful.

Rebels_Droppin@lemmy.world · 2 pts · 3y

Thank you. never put myself in front of my own camera for the 10 years I have been at it. Definitely feel a bit vulnerable. I appreciate your view of it.

MadWorks@lemmy.world · 2 pts · 3y

I really like the lighting choice.

runjun@lemmy.world · 2 pts · 3y (1 reply)

Loved your Inside special

Rebels_Droppin@lemmy.world · 2 pts · 3y

Lol, I'll take Bo

spader312@lemmy.world · 2 pts · 3y (1 reply)

It looks awesome! I recommend keeping your eyes facing the same direction as your face otherwise the whites of the eyes can look unsettling

Rebels_Droppin@lemmy.world · 1 pts · 3y

Thank you

kemsat@lemmy.world · 1 pts · 3y

Looks out of one of those Viking tv shows.