[OC][FB] Haiku; Rain in the Dark

German Original

Regen im Dunkeln
das Laternenlicht schimmert
Sterne aus Wasser

English Translation

Rain in the dark
The lantern light shimmers
Stars made of water


A friend of mine was vacationing in Japan and she send me this image, complaining about the weather during her vacation. So I made up this Haiku and sent it back to cheer her up and not long after she sent me a photo where she was running through the warm rain, laughing and looking at all the city lights.

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3 Comments

queerlilhayseed@piefed.blahaj.zone · 2 pts · 137d (1 reply)

"Sterne aus Wasser" is so pretty 😍 I love it.

Enkrod@feddit.org · 2 pts · 134d

Thank you ☺️

Goodman@discuss.tchncs.de · 1 pts · 96d

Honestly, it fits the Haiku structure perfectly. No comment except, beautifully written.