I really appreciate the OP of this (nontanne) for making me see the poetry in something I was familiar with, but had never considered in this way before. I think it actually works really well as a poem, and I feel like I'm going to remember this each time it's extremely windy
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protist@retrofed.com · 69 pts · 143d
That end tho
Ghostie@lemmy.zip · 57 pts · 143d
ilinamorato@lemmy.world · 9 pts · 142d
Yeah, honestly, this is kind of a banger.
hesh@quokk.au · 33 pts · 143d
It also works backwards
wonderingwanderer@sopuli.xyz · 3 pts · 142d
Make it a palindrome for full circularity
AnarchistArtificer@slrpnk.net · 19 pts · 142d
I really appreciate the OP of this (nontanne) for making me see the poetry in something I was familiar with, but had never considered in this way before. I think it actually works really well as a poem, and I feel like I'm going to remember this each time it's extremely windy
SomeAmateur@sh.itjust.works · 18 pts · 143d
Same!
Deceptichum@quokk.au · 10 pts · 143d
TheRealLinga@sh.itjust.works · 9 pts · 142d
Read this to my wife, telling her it'sa poem. She likes the wordplay, and the metaphors. It made her feel uncertain, uneasy.
Hadriscus@jlai.lu · 8 pts · 142d
Wait let me try the same
edit she said it's beautiful, she could feel the wind. We're not native speakers, so not sure she understood every line. But still
Test_Tickles@lemmy.world · 7 pts · 142d
Also an accurate description of the 2 hours immediately following my consuming taco bell.
ayyy@sh.itjust.works · 2 pts · 142d
You need more vegetables in your diet.
Morphit@feddit.uk · 4 pts · 143d
This sounds so much like Overseer's - Heligoland: https://youtube.com/watch?v=4NmrluR4VkY
Evil_Shrubbery@thelemmy.club · 2 pts · 142d
This leaves rustled jimmies of violent destruction in my already difficult to use mind.