Double bed in the guest room....the one they used to share, before Jim came home from a sales convention and found the twin beds in their place, the ones the kids used to sleep in. No one remembers them but Jim. He has to sleep folded up under stage lights in a little red race car.
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EnmebaraGuesser@piefed.ca · 5 pts · 2d
Superscale Sheets. They might be 30x50 meters or so. Just colossal.
verity_kindle@sh.itjust.works · 5 pts · 2d
Double bed in the guest room....the one they used to share, before Jim came home from a sales convention and found the twin beds in their place, the ones the kids used to sleep in. No one remembers them but Jim. He has to sleep folded up under stage lights in a little red race car.
sbv@sh.itjust.works · 2 pts · 2d
The dialog needs stage directions. Where does Jim enter from? What is he carrying? What is Betty wearing?
verity_kindle@sh.itjust.works · 1 pts · 2d
Either Jim or the suitcase are floating to fit in the frame.