dying

Reminds me of Christopher Lee explaining to Peter Jackson what it sounds like when you stab someone in the back

[off topic]

https://bookshop.org/p/books/body-trauma-a-writer-s-guide-to-wounds-and-injuries-david-w-page-md/5d7eda2851514c8e

David Page, 'Body Trauma'

Describes how people react to various injuries. Invaluable for anyone creating a game or writing a story.

"He closed his eyes and his heart beat one last time. Carla cried in despair as all of his hair fell out, a final sign he would never wake up again."

When an infomercial says, "But wait! There's more!"

That's usually the calibre of writing, but enough people get their credit cards out.

I just came across this. Amos from The Red Pyramid. Carter sees him trapped by the big bad Set only to change the scene.