The boy's 47-year-old mother, her other son, 12, and daughter, eight, were located at around 20:30 by a rescue helicopter clinging to a paddleboard about 14km offshore.
'The boy's 47-year-old mother, her other son, 12, and daughter, eight, were located at around 20:30 by a rescue helicopter.
They were found clinging to a paddleboard about 14km offshore.'
The way they've put it, it sounds like the rescue helicopter was clinging to a paddleboard when it found them!
good edit, also if you use numerals for numbers (12) dont change to word numbers (eight) inmediately after!
also; i want to see the footage of the rescue copter clinging to the paddle board :(
12 Comments
Lost_My_Mind@lemmy.world · 18 pts · 202d
Come birthday time, she BETTER get him a Nintendo 64, and a tamagachi!
Oh, wait, sorry. I was thinking of what I wanted when I was 13.
What do teenage boys like these days, besides boobs?
jet@hackertalks.com · 14 pts · 202d
They are evergreen for a reason
T156@lemmy.world · 3 pts · 202d
Fairly certain that they're not supposed to be green.
Apeman42@lemmy.world · 13 pts · 202d
Disagree, green boobs are awesome.
jet@hackertalks.com · 5 pts · 202d
A man of art and refined taste!
IggyTheSmidge@lemmy.blahaj.zone · 9 pts · 202d
FFS BBC, did nobody proof read this?
lightsblinken@lemmy.world · 2 pts · 201d
what should it say?
IggyTheSmidge@lemmy.blahaj.zone · 4 pts · 201d
Something like:
'The boy's 47-year-old mother, her other son, 12, and daughter, eight, were located at around 20:30 by a rescue helicopter. They were found clinging to a paddleboard about 14km offshore.'
The way they've put it, it sounds like the rescue helicopter was clinging to a paddleboard when it found them!
lightsblinken@lemmy.world · 1 pts · 201d
good edit, also if you use numerals for numbers (12) dont change to word numbers (eight) inmediately after! also; i want to see the footage of the rescue copter clinging to the paddle board :(
mystrawberrymind@piefed.ca · 2 pts · 202d
What a hero! This could be a movie!
MehBlah@lemmy.world · 1 pts · 202d
A bbc link, let me pop over to europe to read it.
AntiBullyRanger@ani.social · 0 pts · 202d