My friend owes a sketchy dude money, so he's been asked to "deliver a package" to another sketchy dude 4 hours away. I dont have kids or dependents, so my buddy asks me to help him out. Shit goes side ways and it becomes clear only one of us is gonna make it out alive. He's got a wife and kids, i just have student loans, so i take the gun and hold off the pissed of dudes while he makes a break for it. I take two hits to my right shoulder before giving them the slip. I know I'm not gonna make it to the hospital, so i make my way to the bench on the river walk nearby so that this can be the last thing i see before i die knowing i did at least one good deed.
Then the craziest thing happened. A golden retriever walked up to me with a stick. He put it in my lap and I faded out in a blinding white light. I woke up with my arm bandaged in a brightly lit, but eerily silent room. I try to move my arm. "Shit." I reach over with my other arm and push the button to tilt up the powered gurney. "The fuck..." as I sit up and look more closely, my arm has actually been converted into a fully mechanical cyborg arm with what appears to be a modified belt fed StG 44 mounted to it and loosely wrapped in bandages. As I wince in pain, the door flies open. Two thugs dressed in black barge in holding a scruffy doctor by the collar. One points his pistol at me. "There's that motherf--" an eruption of gunfire occurs. I look to my left and there's a smoking hole in bed pillow behind me.
After the smoke clears all three men lay on the ground. I drag myself out of bed and kneel at the doctors side. He has a wound in his abdomen. "Your friend.. they have him.... And his family" he says with some effort. "Where?" I demand. He points to one of the slain thugs. A phone protruded from his hip pocket. I unlock it with his thumb print. GPS coordinates. I stand up, the sound of spent shells rolling on the ground and my new arm whirring. Looking at it, I know what I must do now. I pick up the ammo bag next to the bed and sling it over my shoulder and walk out the door.
The White Snow is a symbol of purity a Void of sin blood is the sacrifice for mankind a symbol as seen in the hit TV show Jesus Christ, this is a desire to sacrifice yourself for the sins of the world.
How will the school know you're teaching more? There's not more students paying tuition? I guess you'll use your magical language to do so telepathically.
Maybe we can talk about how a shit load of men fantasize about dying a peaceful and necessary death instead of wanting to live or having to live in reality?
You don't want to detonate the explosives while you're still dangling from the bridge pylon because the enemy army is advancing and there's not enough time to get away safely before they cross?
I think I'd actually like to stand on the bridge and gently play a tune on my flute to distract them long enough for the explosives to go off as they cautiously approach the center where I wait.
Many pieces of film/TV have scenes where a guy has been mortally wounded doing something for the greater good and then bleeds out in a scene like this. It's like a melancholic righteous death
But if you do gotta bleed out it might as well do it on fresh snow in an eerily quiet and peaceful setting, so as the steam rises from your blood your essence gently fades away
Yeah. That's about the only way that I can figure it could be done optically. Or else just fix it in post.
From a visual standpoint I know it lacks realism if we have a man bleeding out against the bench with no footprints or disturbance to show how he got there. But visually it looks better. I'd also costume the man in very gray colours, with almost the only noticeable color being the pool of red slowly spreading. Frank Miller-ish.
It's starts cloudy and when the fight ends it begins to snow. As the protagonist monolgues he and the cooling corpse of his rival bleed out in the accumulating snow. Bam no footprints, two slowly spreading blood pools, monologue, fade to white.
This man has been protecting a young kid from afar. The kid's never met him, but this man has spent the last few months keeping the bad people away from him and it's taken a very obvious toll on his body. Finally, in the final confrontation, he's mortally wounded and bleeding out after killing the "main" antagonist. He goes to his grave stoically, with no one ever knowing what he sacrificed.
Some say that vfx editors and post houses within a 5 mile radius have a fire-department-esque alarm whenever it is muttered 3 times. They’ll show up to grab dailies, curse you for not figuring out a solution in pre-production, then begrudgingly fix the issues.
For the justification for no footprints, you could have it in the script that the one dying fell into place. Fighting atop a crane, in a helicopter, or whatever. Seems appropriate for the kind of film that would end with a nice shot like that anyway. For the practical side, simply catapult the actor into position.
Picture it, though: You're a bad man and you know that one good deed won't change that, even at the cost of your life - but maybe it's enough to regain your soul. The wound doesn't hurt any more and you know that's a sign the end is coming but for the first time in years you feel at peace. Individual snowflakes are settling on your skin like chilly kisses as your eyelids get heavy.
What you mean by bad man? unless you're committing war/ sex crimes... try therapy, drugs or changing your gender.
It's sad that people daydream about that but also kinda delusionally narcissistic, like in a way that could benefit from therapy or just talking to a single other person
I mean that bleeding out in the snow is a cinematic fate usually reserved for hardened killers who are fatally wounded in the process of redeeming themselves. The quiet of the scene reflects the silencing of their inner demons and they accept death with dignity and even a measure of grace.
Cause Allie this the one time men are allowed to get in touch with their feelings with no judgement. It's cinema to go out this way. Way better than dying behind the Arby's dumpster with your pants down. No one wants to die like that.
When you clock out in the snow, have a smoke or swig from a flask or have in your hand a well loved photo of a loved one. Also have no ID, make it a mystery. Go out like a true boss.
The hospital will help anyone at the ER, maybe hand your wallet to a friend so you don't even need to give them any real personal info if you're that afraid of debt.
The lighting is wrong. Need either footlights like you would have on a flight of stairs or omnipresent lighting from an unknown source in the sky. 3/10 would not die here.
TW (trigger warning) paragraph 2 (spoilered, but some instances don't correctly spoiler)
the thing of protagonist (usually not great) does something awesome and dies from it (haven't watched blade runner)
::: spoiler TW (Trigger warning)
also when I said this, some dark thoughts were going through my head... yeah I'm ok, don't worry. I originally thought it was something to do with said thoughts. I thought it meant they want to die. Sorry this turned dark really fast.
It sounds cool to "bleed out", but realistically lots of marginalized and oppressed people simply freeze to death due to the intentional deprivation of basic human needs.
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BakerBagel@midwest.social · 107 pts · 254d
My friend owes a sketchy dude money, so he's been asked to "deliver a package" to another sketchy dude 4 hours away. I dont have kids or dependents, so my buddy asks me to help him out. Shit goes side ways and it becomes clear only one of us is gonna make it out alive. He's got a wife and kids, i just have student loans, so i take the gun and hold off the pissed of dudes while he makes a break for it. I take two hits to my right shoulder before giving them the slip. I know I'm not gonna make it to the hospital, so i make my way to the bench on the river walk nearby so that this can be the last thing i see before i die knowing i did at least one good deed.
That's what guys mean when they say that.
Quadhammer@lemmy.world · 16 pts · 253d
Then the craziest thing happened. A golden retriever walked up to me with a stick. He put it in my lap and I faded out in a blinding white light. I woke up with my arm bandaged in a brightly lit, but eerily silent room. I try to move my arm. "Shit." I reach over with my other arm and push the button to tilt up the powered gurney. "The fuck..." as I sit up and look more closely, my arm has actually been converted into a fully mechanical cyborg arm with what appears to be a modified belt fed StG 44 mounted to it and loosely wrapped in bandages. As I wince in pain, the door flies open. Two thugs dressed in black barge in holding a scruffy doctor by the collar. One points his pistol at me. "There's that motherf--" an eruption of gunfire occurs. I look to my left and there's a smoking hole in bed pillow behind me.
After the smoke clears all three men lay on the ground. I drag myself out of bed and kneel at the doctors side. He has a wound in his abdomen. "Your friend.. they have him.... And his family" he says with some effort. "Where?" I demand. He points to one of the slain thugs. A phone protruded from his hip pocket. I unlock it with his thumb print. GPS coordinates. I stand up, the sound of spent shells rolling on the ground and my new arm whirring. Looking at it, I know what I must do now. I pick up the ammo bag next to the bed and sling it over my shoulder and walk out the door.
DirtMcGirt@lemmy.world · 3 pts · 253d
Fucking bravo 👏 I wanna read the rest of this book.
Camille_Jamal@sh.itjust.works · 1 pts · 253d
Can I have this book? I wanna read it!
BurnedDonutHole@ani.social · 14 pts · 253d
(っ˘̩╭╮˘̩)っ
Agent641@lemmy.world · 9 pts · 253d
It is a far, far better thing I do, than I have ever done.
WorldsDumbestMan@lemmy.today · 2 pts · 253d
Nah, I'm staying behind to get as many spite kills as possible!
socsa@piefed.social · 2 pts · 253d
Yeah I am definitely not eating lead for someone else's kids.
BakerBagel@midwest.social · 1 pts · 238d
You aren't eating lead for his kids. You're eating lead for your friend.he has everything to lose and you have nothing left
M137@lemmy.world · 84 pts · 254d
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According to one of my brothers, this theme is where Santa got his colors.
Pk_thunder@sh.itjust.works · 11 pts · 254d
Who decides to remove these posts?
ozymandias@sh.itjust.works · 9 pts · 253d
it was a poem about bleeding out into the snow… i was kinda proud of it.
REDACTED@infosec.pub · 7 pts · 254d
Reddit automod is leaking to other websites
Xylight@lemdro.id · 2 pts · 253d
Mods need an excuse to use the fancy remove button
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nezrock@lemmy.dbzer0.com · 9 pts · 254d
Removed my bod
After I bled out in the snow.
stupidcasey@lemmy.world · 28 pts · 254d
The White Snow is a symbol of purity a Void of sin blood is the sacrifice for mankind a symbol as seen in the hit TV show Jesus Christ, this is a desire to sacrifice yourself for the sins of the world.
Fizz@lemmy.nz · 19 pts · 254d
Ah if it isnt my high school English teacher
stupidcasey@lemmy.world · 8 pts · 254d
Soldier! Drop and give me 20 essays now!
Camille_Jamal@sh.itjust.works · 3 pts · 253d
Mrs. R! I thought you had too much to mark before the end of the term! What are you doing schooling people online?
(/j)
stupidcasey@lemmy.world · 3 pts · 253d
I get paid more this way.
Camille_Jamal@sh.itjust.works · 1 pts · 253d
How will the school know you're teaching more? There's not more students paying tuition? I guess you'll use your magical language to do so telepathically.
(/j)
SoftestSapphic@lemmy.world · 28 pts · 253d
Maybe we can talk about how a shit load of men fantasize about dying a peaceful and necessary death instead of wanting to live or having to live in reality?
Cuz fuck, that's so bleak.
Agent641@lemmy.world · 10 pts · 253d
Is that not normal?
You don't want to detonate the explosives while you're still dangling from the bridge pylon because the enemy army is advancing and there's not enough time to get away safely before they cross?
burntbacon@discuss.tchncs.de · 7 pts · 253d
I think I'd actually like to stand on the bridge and gently play a tune on my flute to distract them long enough for the explosives to go off as they cautiously approach the center where I wait.
Agent641@lemmy.world · 6 pts · 253d
Nice, man. Charisma 100+
shai_hulud@lemmy.world · 2 pts · 252d
uhhh, charisma -100.
I know. I play the flute.
capuccino@lemmy.world · 26 pts · 254d
I get it but at the same time I do not. It is a reference to a movie or something?
YoFrodo@lemmy.world · 111 pts · 254d
Many pieces of film/TV have scenes where a guy has been mortally wounded doing something for the greater good and then bleeds out in a scene like this. It's like a melancholic righteous death
scytale@piefed.zip · 88 pts · 254d
capuccino@lemmy.world · 59 pts · 254d
HasturInYellow@lemmy.world · 6 pts · 253d
We are speaking to the truth of our current world: there is no hope anymore.
i_stole_ur_taco@lemmy.ca · 18 pts · 254d
Blade Runner 2049 reference maybe?
Klear@quokk.au · 32 pts · 254d
Maybe don't run around with blades if you don't want to cut yourself and bleed out.
shittydwarf@piefed.social · 4 pts · 254d
But if you do gotta bleed out it might as well do it on fresh snow in an eerily quiet and peaceful setting, so as the steam rises from your blood your essence gently fades away
SkunkWorkz@lemmy.world · 5 pts · 254d
It’s at 2049 already? Damn I’ve missed 2048 Blade Runner movies.
Rothe@piefed.social · 3 pts · 253d
It was a trope long before that movie though.
cassandrafatigue@lemmy.dbzer0.com · 5 pts · 253d
BootyEnthusiast@lemmy.dbzer0.com · 23 pts · 254d
I want to bleed out not on the bench, but just below it, my back propped up by the wood.
Adderbox76@lemmy.ca · 23 pts · 253d
The cinematographer in me is wondering how I would go about staging the scene without putting footprints in the snow.
Test_Tickles@lemmy.world · 9 pts · 253d
Composite 2 shots maybe? You would have to be sure to map routes in and out of the scene and then make sure the action doesn't cross those routes.
Adderbox76@lemmy.ca · 7 pts · 253d
Yeah. That's about the only way that I can figure it could be done optically. Or else just fix it in post.
From a visual standpoint I know it lacks realism if we have a man bleeding out against the bench with no footprints or disturbance to show how he got there. But visually it looks better. I'd also costume the man in very gray colours, with almost the only noticeable color being the pool of red slowly spreading. Frank Miller-ish.
yngmnwntr@lemmy.ml · 9 pts · 253d
It's starts cloudy and when the fight ends it begins to snow. As the protagonist monolgues he and the cooling corpse of his rival bleed out in the accumulating snow. Bam no footprints, two slowly spreading blood pools, monologue, fade to white.
Adderbox76@lemmy.ca · 3 pts · 253d
I'd say no dialogue. Tell the story visually.
This man has been protecting a young kid from afar. The kid's never met him, but this man has spent the last few months keeping the bad people away from him and it's taken a very obvious toll on his body. Finally, in the final confrontation, he's mortally wounded and bleeding out after killing the "main" antagonist. He goes to his grave stoically, with no one ever knowing what he sacrificed.
ulterno@programming.dev · 4 pts · 253d
You are thinking too hard.
Just projectile him into position.
Test_Tickles@lemmy.world · 3 pts · 252d
Jentu@lemmy.ml · 5 pts · 253d
Say fix it in post 3 times. Then shoot clean plates and hope the studio has a vfx budget.
Adderbox76@lemmy.ca · 7 pts · 253d
Does that make a computer effects tech appear like Beetlejuice?
Jentu@lemmy.ml · 4 pts · 253d
Some say that vfx editors and post houses within a 5 mile radius have a fire-department-esque alarm whenever it is muttered 3 times. They’ll show up to grab dailies, curse you for not figuring out a solution in pre-production, then begrudgingly fix the issues.
Grabthar@lemmy.world · 2 pts · 253d
For the justification for no footprints, you could have it in the script that the one dying fell into place. Fighting atop a crane, in a helicopter, or whatever. Seems appropriate for the kind of film that would end with a nice shot like that anyway. For the practical side, simply catapult the actor into position.
orbituary@lemmy.dbzer0.com · 22 pts · 254d
grue@lemmy.world · 12 pts · 254d
Pro-tip: you can add the language you want for syntax highlighting to your preformatted block sections. Compare:
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orbituary@lemmy.dbzer0.com · 4 pts · 254d
Thank you
Tonava@sopuli.xyz · 2 pts · 253d
ozymandias@lemmy.dbzer0.com · 6 pts · 254d
appropriate username
Godric@lemmy.world · 3 pts · 254d
Behold my works, ye mighty, and despair!
jerkface@lemmy.ca · 3 pts · 254d
Settle down, Ozzy.
nostrauxendar@lemmy.world · 22 pts · 254d
Oh fuck yeah that's prime real estate
P00ptart@lemmy.world · 21 pts · 254d
It doesn't have to be that way if you just leave John wick the fuck alone.
BlameTheAntifa@lemmy.world · 19 pts · 253d
Listen, periods are not as glamorous as you’ve been led to believe.
resipsaloquitur@lemmy.world · 13 pts · 254d
Throbbing_banjo@lemmy.dbzer0.com · 2 pts · 253d
Is that Lady Snowblood? I still need to watch that
resipsaloquitur@lemmy.world · 1 pts · 253d
Ayup.
spittingimage@lemmy.world · 13 pts · 253d
Picture it, though: You're a bad man and you know that one good deed won't change that, even at the cost of your life - but maybe it's enough to regain your soul. The wound doesn't hurt any more and you know that's a sign the end is coming but for the first time in years you feel at peace. Individual snowflakes are settling on your skin like chilly kisses as your eyelids get heavy.
TeraByteMarx@lemmy.dbzer0.com · 2 pts · 253d
What you mean by bad man? unless you're committing war/ sex crimes... try therapy, drugs or changing your gender. It's sad that people daydream about that but also kinda delusionally narcissistic, like in a way that could benefit from therapy or just talking to a single other person
spittingimage@lemmy.world · 4 pts · 252d
I mean that bleeding out in the snow is a cinematic fate usually reserved for hardened killers who are fatally wounded in the process of redeeming themselves. The quiet of the scene reflects the silencing of their inner demons and they accept death with dignity and even a measure of grace.
I dig well-executed tropes.
ShaggySnacks@lemmy.myserv.one · 13 pts · 253d
Cause Allie this the one time men are allowed to get in touch with their feelings with no judgement. It's cinema to go out this way. Way better than dying behind the Arby's dumpster with your pants down. No one wants to die like that.
When you clock out in the snow, have a smoke or swig from a flask or have in your hand a well loved photo of a loved one. Also have no ID, make it a mystery. Go out like a true boss.
ProfessorHoover@infosec.pub · 3 pts · 253d
Kinda like the Somerton Man although he died having a cigarette on the beach, leaving behind a coded message and a possible illegitimate child.
Naho_Zako@piefed.zip · 12 pts · 254d
Ash, just go to the hospital please...
HeyThisIsntTheYMCA@lemmy.world · 7 pts · 254d
No
TonyTonyChopper@mander.xyz · 3 pts · 253d
With what money
NigelFrobisher@aussie.zone · 4 pts · 253d
For the shop there? Or parking?
finitebanjo@lemmy.world · 3 pts · 253d
The hospital will help anyone at the ER, maybe hand your wallet to a friend so you don't even need to give them any real personal info if you're that afraid of debt.
rumba@lemmy.zip · 7 pts · 253d
The hospital near my house has a HORRIBLE track record of letting people die in the waiting room.
finitebanjo@lemmy.world · 3 pts · 253d
As opposed to dying on the steps.
rumba@lemmy.zip · 5 pts · 253d
They do have wheelchairs and ramps that are reasonably well maintained
ShaggySnacks@lemmy.myserv.one · 4 pts · 253d
Yes however we will be alone with snow falling?
copymyjalopy@sh.itjust.works · 10 pts · 253d
Ooooh that's a good spot to die on.
Saapas@piefed.zip · 10 pts · 254d
It's from Istanbul, apparently
DrSleepless@lemmy.world · 13 pts · 254d
Not Constantinople?
kambusha@sh.itjust.works · 15 pts · 254d
That's nobodies' business but the Turks
NotASharkInAManSuit@lemmy.world · 10 pts · 254d
Been a long time gone, Constantinople.
crazycraw@crazypeople.online · 7 pts · 254d
brb, putting on the Ritz.
Davel23@fedia.io · 3 pts · 254d
Not Constantinople?
raspberriesareyummy@lemmy.world · 3 pts · 254d
My second home and I didn't recognize it. /blushes
Edit: then again, resolution sucks and this could be anywhere, really.
Siethron@lemmy.world · 3 pts · 253d
Not enough cats in this picture
RizzRustbolt@lemmy.world · 8 pts · 253d
The seduction of the Noir.
Diddlydee@feddit.uk · 7 pts · 254d
I'd like to do baby footprints with the side of my loosely clinched hand and dab in the toes with my fingers, but whatever.
PabloSexcrowbar@piefed.social · 4 pts · 254d
It's possible to do two things with one's life.
muzzle@lemmy.zip · 5 pts · 254d
Is that the war-torn moon Europa?
Kaput@lemmy.world · 5 pts · 254d
Screw that, I'm not bleeding out freezing.
On the other hand it would make one metal snow angel.
Furbag@lemmy.world · 4 pts · 254d
You wouldn't understand...
Kolanaki@pawb.social · 4 pts · 254d
Too cold; blood'll freeze and stopped bleeding.
Quexotic@sh.itjust.works · 4 pts · 254d
That wouldn't be so bad.
AgentOrangesicle@lemmy.world · 4 pts · 253d
The lighting is wrong. Need either footlights like you would have on a flight of stairs or omnipresent lighting from an unknown source in the sky. 3/10 would not die here.
FrowingFostek@lemmy.world · 4 pts · 254d
This reminds me of that Don McLean song Vincent.
Diddlydee@feddit.uk · 1 pts · 254d
FrowingFostek@lemmy.world · 2 pts · 254d
And the virgin snow line. I really like that song.
buttnugget@lemmy.world · 3 pts · 253d
Bleed (out here) or (bleed out) here?
dnick@sh.itjust.works · 1 pts · 238d
Bleed out
WorldsDumbestMan@lemmy.today · 3 pts · 253d
Heck you want to freeze to death while bleeding to death? Maximizing suffering.
Camille_Jamal@sh.itjust.works · 2 pts · 253d
If I go numb, I can't feel it right?
(not a dude, but still)
WorldsDumbestMan@lemmy.today · 2 pts · 253d
Good point, I think...
Camille_Jamal@sh.itjust.works · 2 pts · 249d
No, not at all.
It's me coping with humor (or trying to)
MeThisGuy@feddit.nl · 2 pts · 253d
I'm sure the wound will just freeze closed right?
DagwoodIII@piefed.social · 2 pts · 254d
https://youtu.be/XK0mjeIky0Y
The original
ElectricAirship@lemmy.dbzer0.com · 2 pts · 254d
Blade Runner 2049?
Camille_Jamal@sh.itjust.works · 2 pts · 253d
I think I might get it
I don't know if I do can someone explain it?
AgentOrangesicle@lemmy.world · 5 pts · 253d
Watch Blade Runner 2049 and make believe that you're a real boy.
Camille_Jamal@sh.itjust.works · 1 pts · 249d
TW (trigger warning) paragraph 2 (spoilered, but some instances don't correctly spoiler)
the thing of protagonist (usually not great) does something awesome and dies from it (haven't watched blade runner)
::: spoiler TW (Trigger warning)
also when I said this, some dark thoughts were going through my head... yeah I'm ok, don't worry. I originally thought it was something to do with said thoughts. I thought it meant they want to die. Sorry this turned dark really fast.
:::
have a great day
AgentOrangesicle@lemmy.world · 2 pts · 248d
Yeah, you're right about the protagonist doing something selfless before finding peace in the snow of a lonely but beautiful landscape.
RandomStickman@fedia.io · 2 pts · 254d
Yeah
technocrit@lemmy.dbzer0.com · 1 pts · 253d
It sounds cool to "bleed out", but realistically lots of marginalized and oppressed people simply freeze to death due to the intentional deprivation of basic human needs.
usernamefactory@lemmy.ca · 1 pts · 253d
cassandrafatigue@lemmy.dbzer0.com · -31 pts · 253d
87Six@lemmy.zip · 28 pts · 253d
Ah yes, the best way to counter the misoginists: misandry
finitebanjo@lemmy.world · -1 pts · 253d
That must be Pizzacake.
cassandrafatigue@lemmy.dbzer0.com · -1 pts · 253d
Gladaed@feddit.org · 14 pts · 253d
Yikes
GrammarPolice@lemmy.world · 10 pts · 253d
Is there some sarcasm I'm missing?
snugglesthefalse@sh.itjust.works · 5 pts · 253d
Yeah right? I love unprovoked attacks on something I didn't choose to be.
biggeoff@sh.itjust.works · 6 pts · 253d
That's a yikes
WorldsDumbestMan@lemmy.today · 2 pts · 253d
No thanks, I'd rather get vaporized by a neutron star, I had enough man stuff. Let's trade!
GrammarPolice@lemmy.world · 0 pts · 253d
Username doesn't check out?
REDACTED@infosec.pub · 2 pts · 253d
How nice of your gender
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